Blog 9 seven deadly sins revised

I changed the whole paper around.  Well maybe not the whole things. But I took out the awkward introduction and the one student I had as wrath and replaced it with the narrator. So as the person was telling the story, he or she only told of six of the sins and you realize that the seventh, wrath is the narrator. I added and fixed the dialogue. Other than that I was happy with the way I wrote the paper.